Wednesday, May 25, 2011

My shortest poem, called "The Itch"

    
     out there
     is
     adventure . . .
     I am
     going.











14 comments:

  1. Great short poem. "the itch" for adventure we all itch for it but many don't take the "i am going" step.

    http://scattermusings.blogspot.com/2011/05/if-you-can-forgive-but.html

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  2. You go girl! I had no idea a person could capture the essence of a poem in just 7 words! I have sat here trying to do the same thing and lets just say its not working on my end. Ten words at best for me and my poem is not making any sense. LOL

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  3. wow...so much said in so little....
    nicely done...:))

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  4. Thanks Debbie! I'm following your blog.

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  5. Rene, you probably need more coffee and chocolate!

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  6. I absolutely love your blog. Followed you on Networked Blogs and google. You are doing super...my hubby writes a similar blog to yours called Against The Current http://againstthecurrent.blogspot.com a social commentary humor blog of the daily stupidity around us...the video fo the lady on a plane you won't forget. Anyways, keep up the blog and I will be reading! Fonda

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  7. Hi Megha! I followed your blog through networked blogs.

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  8. Sherman,
    It's very hard job to convey yourself in very few and attractive way ....and i think you have that art......
    Hemant

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